WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
As I walk on my last step I hear the bridge collapsing into itty bitty pieces into the horrible lake .But luckily I crossed the bridge before it broke down.The bridge looks as if it was 178 years old. I saw lots of people taking photos.This looks like it has sneaky snakes and deadly spiders.This is an old mysterious forest.I am here with my family.I wonder what is at the end of the forest.I taste the slippery rain softly dropping on me.I walked through a tunnel I saw lots of spider webs and bats.Ohhhhhh I can hear the wind blowing over my face.I am running after my hat. I am sure this was in the morning.The bridge is there because some one needs to cross and find whatever is on the other side.It is a mystery.I can smell flower freshness on the other side of the magical bridge. I can feel the crusty old bridge.Man that adventure was awesome!
