Once there was a little girl and her sister.The girl's name was Beau and the big girl was Emile-Rose.Once Beau couldn't sleep ,neither could her sister so they talked till they were tired.So in the morning they woke up and they got a call from there cousin in Auckland. They lived in a house in the city of Christchurch so their cousins said” we will come over ‘. We can go to the mall together.We will call you when we're here.Beau we are going to set up a room for our three cousins because they’re coming over for a trip.There's enough beds for three.
‘ Come on let's go shopping to buy some drinks,lollies and popcorn for a movie and subway for tea’ said Emile-Rose.
‘How are you guys ?’asked Beau .
‘We’re fine ‘said Mia.Should we go and eat now?
‘Yes’ said Kyra.
Splat, the subway fell.
‘Beau can you please get a cloth to wipe down the table?’
Everyone lets go and watch a movie and have some pop corn corn chips and lollies.
‘What should we watch ?’said Disha .
‘Let's watch Annie ‘said Beau.
‘Okay everyone in bed get some sleep ‘ whispered Emile-Rose.
‘Oh that was a great sleep let's get ready for the mall’ said Disha.
Look let's buy some clothes.’KFC for tea’ said beau
‘Yum KFC said Mia
‘Sleep everyone ‘said Disha.
’That was a my beauty sleep’ said Beau.
‘Let's go to the zoo’ said Disha.
‘Look I can see a lion it - looks scary ‘ said Mia.
’Those teeth are sharp’ said Beau.
Roar! Goes the mighty lion.
‘ I like those horses they are as pretty as roses’ said Beau.
That horse is magnificent and marvellous. Bye bye cousins .
‘I loved this trip it was awesome’! - Have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.
- Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
- Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a teacher before you blog
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